Tale of a {Deicide} - Reviews

Really good hentai/18+ novel, the interactions with both his mother and sister, plus his way of thinking would even have s*x with his mother who was quiet nice. Although I hope he doesn't just stick to them only and expandes his empire.

Super rushed with no plot whatsoever , it feels like reading a roughly skimmed journalThere is no connection to the characters or the world,It feels like reading a bunch of random words and it makes no sense.In conclusion I DO NOT RECOMMEND.

Really like the stories premise, enjoying it greatly so far. Hopefully it gets to the future where the alluded to importance of the game is revealed.

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Good story overall. Well written and interesting. However, I can’t get over the academy sending two brand new students to a place they didn’t even check on and then didn’t even consider saving them from when they found out it had an emergency. Then let them sit for a day before others had to take them back. Then they had to explain themselves to everyone multiple times!!! It was very frustrating to read and a glaring logic oversight by the author. Also, others were almost killed and everyone laughs it off. Just stupid.

Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the  engagement of your book

"Sorry. I truly am. Thank you for saving me. It was entirely my fault."

Everybody holds thoughts of having an affair, it was just that some of them were lucky enough to follow through on it while some weren't. Moreover, once such a thing happens, in comparison to a man, it was always easier for a woman to find a reason to justify the affair and accept that reality quite quickly. Just like how the adage went - Life is like rape, and since you're powerless against it, you might as well enjoy it wholeheartedly.

The premise is good and I he system seems decent too but the speed of plot advancement and the irrelevance of cultivation throws you off. There’s no political intrigue. It’s more of a action cultivation novel where the mc is an emperor. The worst is the inconsistency in translation, which ranges from names of the empires, cultivation levels, characters and more. Even the mc’s name has a George in it at one point for some reason. In conclusion, even if the plot is decent with potential, the translation leaves it abysmal to read.

Simple and straight to the point. Characters and their personalities are shown well via interactions, and the overall direction is clear. Some grammar could be checked again, like maybe the tense, or certain things can be just said as it is and not stretched out too far. Pacing for the story starts off well but there are moments were it's too fast, and may need build up for key moments like events and character development. Recommended for readers who enjoy an action packed adventure with an MC who clearly wants to rise in strength.